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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:59 pm 
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Mickey Mouse is sitting on his chair in Mickey's House at Mickey's Toontown fair. Then Mickey Mouse heard someone in trouble. Then Mickey Mouse is walking into danger. Then Mickey saw a small boy fall down. Are you ok! Said Mickey. Then Mickey Mouse Didn't know that small boy is really the evil Ratigan in disguise. Then evil Ratigan take off his disguise and Ratigan and his henchrats grabbed Mickey Mouse to his mansion. Then the evil Ratigan and his henchrats bring Mickey to his mansion. "So Mickey Mouse I have you now and you my prisoner!"Said evil Ratigan! What are you going to do to me! Said Mickey! Then the evil Ratigan and his henchrats took Mickey to the my mansion and the have a raft in the pool in the back. Henchrats tied up bound and gagged in duct tape and now Mickey Mouse is tied up bound and gagged to the raft on the pool and so they did. "mmmmmm"! muffled Mickey! The raft will sink with Mickey Mouse tied up bound and gagged! Then suddenly his gag came off and cried out HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!! cried Mickey! But then one of evil Ratigan Henchrats put back his gag "mmmmmmmm"! Muffled Mickey! Then Evil Ratigan Bwahahhhha! I have Mickey Mouse bound and gagged to the raft. and disney world will be mine! "You never get away with this!" Said Mickey Mouse! Then the evil Ratigan put back the duct tape over Mickey's Mouth! Goodbye Mickey Mouse! "mmmmmmmm" still muffled Mickey! The evil Ratigan put a small hole in the raft! To make sure that Mickey Mouse won't escape tight the ropes tighter so Mickey Mouse won't escape in my hands! Then evil Ratigan and his henchrats left and leave Mickey Mouse tied up bound and gagged to the raft! Then suddenly the raft is started to sink. " HELP!" muffled Mickey! Meanwhile in Disney world Minnie said " Do you see any sign of Mickey Mouse!" Then evil Ratigan said " Oh! Your beloved Mickey Mouse is tied up bound and gagged in the raft! and now the raft is sinking with Mickey Mouse still tied up bound and gagged!" Surrender now! or Mickey Mouse is doomed for sure!

I hope some one can save Mickey Mouse in time.

And now it is your turn do you have any ideas to save Mickey Mouse from the sinking raft!

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 6:13 pm 
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What happends next?? I'm sensing a Breakin' 4th wall plot happening, with a hint of House Of Mouse.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 6:56 pm 
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I was thinking that Mickey is all tied up in the raft. I wanted to see "What Happend Next!" to our beloved Mickey.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 9:59 am 
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Location: beyond the meadows of joy and the valley of contentment
:D.
Minnie:we'll never give you Disney World!.
Ratigan:then Mickey Mouse will die!.
Donald:Yay! no more Mickey marchandise!.
Ratigan:you mean you never cared for him.
Goofy:of course! he's the one who allways get the marchandise and not us.
Mickey Mouse:Mmmmm!.
*Mickey drown and he goes to Atlantis and meet... a monkey named Kida!*.
Kida:who are you and what are you doing in my land werid creature?.
Mickey Mouse:Mmmmm.
*she get the gag off him*.
Mickey Mouse:i"m Mickey Mouse!.
Kida:who?.
Mickey Mouse:you never heard of me?.
Kida:no.
Mickey Mouse:oh,anyway i must get to land.
Kida:so do i,i must talk to my father-King Kong,i made a deal with the Kraken from Pirates Of the Caribbean but i don't see him!.
*The Kraken takes Mickey Mouse and Kida to land*.
Mickey Mouse:no we need to go to DisneyLand.
Kida:will i meet my father there?.
Mickey Mouse:Hmmm,yeah!.
Kida:very well then.
*they go but they are captured by Pocahontas and the Indians*.
Kida:that Kraken brought us to a camp!.
*Kida and Mickey are tied up to a tree*.
Mickey Mouse:let us go or i"ll sing!.
Pocahontas:Gag him!.
Mickey Mouse:oh no!.
*flit put a gag on Mickey*.
Pocahontas:and now since you came to my land... you will watch The Little Mermaid II!.
Kida:no! please! i beg for you!.
*Pocahontas turns on the TV*.
Melody:okay get a grip,get a hang of this flipper it's like....
Kida:My eyes! my eyes!.
*Kida dies*.
Mickey Mouse:Mmmmmmmm! Mmmmmmmm!.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 10:39 am 
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OH MY! Kidagakash has come back to life! It is a miracle! :roll:

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:05 am 
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she did? :o man,i need to put more poisen in her tea :x.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:34 am 
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or throw it to a volcanoe, this way you'll secure rainings, a fare weater, plants...and fun


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:38 am 
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or throw it to a volcanoe, this way you'll secure rainings, a fare weater, plants...and fun

Sounds like fun :D i"ll get the ropes and the gag and throw her to the volcanoe.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:53 am 
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Location: beyond the meadows of joy and the valley of contentment
Pocahontas:shall i stop?.
Mickey:Mmmmm!.
Pocahontas:okay,if'll tell me where's Jhon Smith!.
Kida:who?.
Pocahontas:my boyfriend.
Kida:*you* have a boyfriend?.
Pocahontas:that's it!.
*Pocahontas is about to kill her but she trip,fall and faint*.
Kida:so much for mrs Colors Of The Wind.
*Belle come with her Yallow dress*.
Belle:Where am i?.
Kida:an indian village.
Belle:Oh,and you are?.
Kida:princess Kidagashlalalalalalalalala,or just Kida.
Belle:are you the one that wanted to joine our Disney Princess Franchise?.
Kida:yup.
Belle:*in sweet voice* well,then...
*Belle pull a knife,scary music*.
Mickey Mouse:Mmmmm!.
Belle:...you see,we don't add monkeys to our franchise,but when you tried to kill Mrs Potts after that...
*Belle comes closer*.
Mickey Mouse:Mmmmmm! Mmmmm! Mmmm!.
Kida:noooooooooo!.
*Belle trip becuse of Pocahontas,fall and faint*.
Kida:that was close.
*TinkerBell comes with a gun*/
Kida:what's worng with you people!?!?.

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I can't wait to read what happend next to Mickey Mouse!

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 9:27 am 
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Location: beyond the meadows of joy and the valley of contentment
*Thanks Jasmine for the idea*.
*TinkerBell is about to shoot when then come... Hades*.
Hades:no!.
TinkerBell:*Tinker Tinker* (but i wanted to shoot them!).
Kida:oh,Hades,you came to rescue me!.
Hades:of course,i love you.
*Hades untie her and sing*.
Hades:living in the UnderWorld dead is every thing you see,who whould thought i"d love a girl with body skinny as skelengton!.
Kida:i"ve been living in my lame kingdom and seeked for my father and now i've tasted manta and i"m never going back!.
Mickey Mouse:Mmmmm!.
TinkerBell:*tinker tinker* (geez).
Hades and Kida:cuz without....
*the Kraken come from the sea*.
Kida:you! you betrryed me!.
Kraken:no,kida,i"m your father.
Kida:WHAT!?!?.
Kraken:yes,i toled the Atlantean to covince you that King Kong was your father.
Kida:oh,father,but why you lefted me?.
Kraken:becouse of your mother...
Kida:my... mother?.
Kraken:yes,she's here.
Elizabeth:DAMN RIGHT! I HAVE A LAME HUSBEND! WHY IS MY GIRL LOOK LIKE A MONKEY!?.
Kraken:she drive me insane! i left her in this village and wanted to tell you everything *crying* now i see why Jack Sparrow and Will Turner left her here *crying* i couldn't rise you alone.
Kida:Oh,father.
Elizabeth:from bloody pirates to bloody karkens! and who is he!?.
Kida:mother,this is the man of my dreams-Hades.
Elizabeth:fine,you can merry him.
Kraken:he'll be the son i never had.
Hades:you have money here?.
Kraken:yes.
Hades:then let's merry.
*The Kraken,Elizabeth,Kida and Hades leave*
TinkerBell:*tinker tinker* (wait! don't leave me here with the crazy mouse).
Mickey Mouse:Mmmmmm!.
*TinkerBell untie Mickey and put the gag off him*.
Mickey Mouse:thank you,now we can...
*Mickey Mouse is bound and gagged (again) by The Queen*.
The Queen:now DisneyLand shall be mine!.
*TinkerBell fly away,she meet Aurora and Merryweather*.
Aurora:A Bug!.
Merrywather:it's a pixie.
Aurora:Oh.
Merryweather:she says that The Queen from Snow White got that Mouse that allways gets marchandise insted of us.
Aurora:finally The Queen is usefull for something.
Merryweather:meybe she's got Flora and Founa!.
Aurora:then we better go.
*Aurora,TinkerBell and Merryweather go The Queen castle*.

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Location: beyond the meadows of joy and the valley of contentment
*Meanwhile in the Queen's Castle*.
*Mickey is tied up to chair,The Queen walks to the mirror*.
The Queen:Mirror Mirror on the wall,who will get franchised first?.
Mirror:Snow White will get franchised and asking me that question!.
The Queen:WHAT!?!?!?.
*The Queen breaks the mirror*.
The Queen:i captured that money maker mouse and she'll get franchised!? blast that Snow White!.
*She open her spell book*.
*Aurora,TinkerBell and Merryweather walks in*.
The Queen:how dare you get into my castle!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?.
Aurora:what have you done with Flora and Founa?.
The Queen:who?.
Aurora:the fairies.
The Queen:fairies!?!? when will i get franchised!?!?!?.
*The Queen jump from a window*.
Aurora:oh well,let's go home.
*TinkerBell goes to NeverLand,Aurora and Merryweather goes to the unknown castle*.
*Mickey get the gag off him*.
Mickey:wait!.
*Ariel pop in*.
Ariel:have you seen Flounder?.
Mickey:no,but if you'll untie me i"ll help you.
Ariel:you will?.
Mikcey:yep.
Ariel:allright.
*Ariel swim to him,but then...*.

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i can't hardly wait to read "What happend next" to our beloved Mickey Mouse!

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 12:17 pm 
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Location: beyond the meadows of joy and the valley of contentment
*Sebastian swim to the surface*.
Sebastian:Ariel,Flounder is not... Ariel! What are you doing!?.
Ariel:i"m helping that poor mouse.
Sebastian:Ariel,dis is dat mouse that becouse of him we don't get marchandise!.
Ariel:What!?.
*Ariel's angrey,Mickey smile nervouse*.
Ariel:you'll stay here!.
Mickey:no! wait!.
*Ariel put a gag on Mickey and dive with Sebastian to the ocean*.
Mickey:Mmmmmmm!.
*Snow White walks in*.
Snow White:oh my... what are you doing here you marchandise thife?.
Mickey:Mmmmm!.
*Snow White throw him from the window*.
*Mickey Mouse fall to snow*.
*Mulan and Mushu walks in and get him*.
Mulan:look! a hun! we captured one!.
Mickey:Mmmmm! Mmmmm! Mmmmm!.
Mushu:Girl,that ain't a hun! that's that mouse that get all the marchandise.
Mulan:oh,him? wait,they'll blame us for kidnapting him.
Mushu:Oh,man,What do we do?.
*Mulan put Mickey on a Carrige*.
*Cinderella turn aorund and finds Mickey in the carrige*.
Cinderella:Oh my,who are you?.
Mickey:Mmmmm!.
Cinderella:I don't understand you.
Mickey:Mmmm!.
Cinderella:good bye.
*Cinderella kicks Mickey out*.
*Mickey roll and Aladdin and Jasmine find him*.
Aladdin:is that a rat?.
Jasmine:i"ll squash him!.
*Jasmine try to squash him but he roll and meet Winnie The Pooh*.
Winnie The Pooh:oh look,Food.
*Alice waked up and scream*.
*Mickey get pushed Bound and Gagged to a river and drown*.
Alice:Oh my,i need to stop take drunks.
Chashire Cat:so do i.
Alice:let's go play criket.
*Alice and the Chashire cat goes*.
*The End*.

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that is really the end? i hope to read what happend next to our beloved mickey mouse next! Can Mickey Mouse escape!

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Allright,i"ll wirte some more :D.

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Allright,i"ll wirte some more :D.
Good! But i was thinking Mickey's evil twin who tied up the real Mickey Mouse to the abandoned toy factory!

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Then the narrator said, "This is madness."

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i want to read what happend next to our beloved Mickey Mouse!

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Location: beyond the meadows of joy and the valley of contentment
*And so Mickey land on a boat and meet... Prudance!!!!*.
*Prudance untie Mickey and take his gag off*.
Mickey:thank you.
Prudance:wait,i love you.
Mickey:so do i.
*Prudance and Mickey kisses but then Monstro eat them*.
*Prudance and Mickey get to Monstro's stumck and meet Pinochhio and Jimminy Cricket*.
Pinochhio:can you help us get out?.
Prudance:now.
Pinnochio:fine,you can sing jimminy.
Jimminy:When you wish upon a...
*Prudance sqush him*.
Pinnochio:Nnnooooo! that's it.
*Pinnochio throw Mickey and Prudance from Monstro*.
*Mickey and Prudance land in castle and they are captured by the evil.. Marie!*.
Marie:who are you? now you're mine and i"ll use you to get me my own movie like TinkerBell! *evil laught*.
Prudance:no... you're crazy! people will look for us!.
Marie:they won't! you're a mouse who steal spotlight and you're a character from a cheap sequle!.
*Marie tie Mickey and gag him and she put Prudance in a cage high above*.
Prudance:good bye my love...
Mickey:Mmmm!.
*Marie shout some light on Mickey*.
Mickey:Mmmmm! Mmmm!.
Marie:*evil laghut*,and you're next! *pointing Prudance*.
*but then the wall is breaked and Minnie pop in*.
Minnie:Mickey!.
Mickey:Mmmm!.
Marie:no! it's imposible!.
Minnie:it is!.
Marie:Noooooooo!.
*Minnie push Marie from the window*.
Marie:*screaming* *splash*.
*Minnie untie Mickey and get the gag off him*.
Mickey:i love you.
Minnie:so do i.
Prudance:hey! what about me?.
Minnie:who cares about you? you're from a cheapqule.
Mickey:yeah!.
*Mickey and Minnie leave*
Prudance:i can't beleive it!.
*Prudance carying*.
*Mushu comes*.
Mushu:why are you crying?.
Prudance:becouse... *sniff* becouse my beloved one left me for a slutish mouse! *crying*.
Mushu:oh,i"m sorry.
Prudance:but i love you!.
Mushu:i love you too!.
*Mushu make fire and open the door*.
Prudance:oh thank you!.
*they kissed*.
Marie:not so fast!.
*Mushu and Prudance see Marie*.
Marie:i"m getting my own movie and no one will stop me!.
*Marie chases Prudance and Mushu,Prudance and Mushu run*.
*but then...*.

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